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Their Eyes Were Watching G-d

I didn't write a lot this summer so I was just getting back into it.

My paper on Janie needed more connections and a tighter thesis. I believe once I master that my ideas and writing will flow better and it will be easier to convey my thoughts.


P + P 
I really need to proofread my work. I made a lot of grammatical error and spelling mistakes.
I need to make my ideas more clear and organized. Working on my structure and planning ahead will improve this. Because this was the first time I had to come up with my own question and brainstorm my essay evolved as I was writing and I wasn't consistent.

Hamlet

I learned how to develop my ideas in a different and affective way. I believe that when I learn how to develop my thesis in a affective way my papers will improve dramatically. Paying close attention to apostrophes will help my grammatical errors. Also, knowing that using a word multiple times is better than using a word in the wrong context will making my writing stronger. I'm excited to continue growing as a writer.